The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/08
Wonderful, authentic and shiver-producing.
02/09/08
Love the "Jewishness" of this - obviously a lot of research went into this piece (or you have the background already). This was compelling, and a fresh take on this ultimate betrayal.
02/12/08
This is very well written! The names, the words and the descriptions especially, you mostly pull this together with dialouge, that matches the speakers correctly! I loved the line with as you think in your heart, so are you, that is so true and it seemed to jump out at me as I read this piece. Truly wonderful writing, this is a favorite of mine this week! ^_^