The Official Writing Challenge
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Great "action packed" beginning, and nice turn into the devotional. I love your attitude about the fire and the things you learned. Enjoyed this very much, as I look around at all His possessions. Guess everything we have here is only on loan. Thanks for the reminder!
This is a great reminder that they are only our possessions for a short time. Excellent MC point of view. And that we learn from every experience we have.
02/04/08
Your beginning is certainly an excellent hook - I HAD to keep reading! The rest did not disappoint. Great lesson for all of us, very well conveyed.