The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/08
Very visual, and I could almost smell the sulfur.
01/26/08
Good description - I could see the demons and the sludge and the ...ugh! Glad I won't be there! LOL Great job!
01/31/08
Congratulations on Highly Commended! Excellent piece!!!!
01/31/08
This gave me goosebumps reading it! Congrats on a piece well written. Your descriptions were great and I was rooting for the girl all the way that they wouldn't get to her. Great job! ^_^
Great word choices. Congrats on the HC, well deserved. Nice change from the daily grind on earth.