The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, sad and powerful messages in this one. It's true, too! The seeds we sow in youth may take a while to catch up to us, but they invariably grow.
This one is sad, but powerful... I really appreciated this story and the message behind it.
Great title - and your ending is fabulous. I love the emotion.

It may be me, but I don't think the emotion really came across very well in the middle part of the story. I'd fuse some in there as well to make this good piece even better.

Keep writing.
I concur with Joanne. Much of the story reads like a biography, though it draws to a touching conclusion. Perhaps employing more dialog/interaction between characters would give the reader more connection to the characters.