The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
This is perfection! A Well told story that pulls the reader in and a solid message. Excellent entry!
05/23/05
very nicely written. :-)
05/23/05
Sits here clapping his hands. Make it into a movie.
05/23/05
Excellent and I must admire your ability to make up the characters' names.
05/24/05
You managed to convey some very strong characters in your story - not through describing their physical characterisitices but what they said and did and how it was said and done! Very good.
05/25/05
Heads over hormones! Engaging and well drawn characters. Thanks for submitting this delightful story.
05/25/05
Oh, I forgot to say, I love the title!
05/26/05
Well done! I agree about your ability to come up with character names - amazing! I'm glad you're hanging around the Advanced level. It's definitely where you belong.
Blessings, Lynda
Absolutely delightful in every way. I wish more young ladies thought like Ceylenne and not like Taylona. Beautifully done. Very creative and pleasurable to read.
05/26/05
Wow - What an imagination! Well done!

05/29/05
Well done - I agree - make it into a movie! When is part two?