The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Interesting setting! I liked the "character" descriptions at the beginning. But, I was hoping for more evangelism. I was left feeling there was something missing.
12/08/07
This was a very unique entry. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
12/08/07
Great descriptions. I hope this is part of a longer work - would love to learn more about these folks.
12/10/07
Good descriptive work. An enjoyable read.