The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
This is lovely. As I read it, I could see an image in my mind of the events, and the sounds are so well described, I can hear each one. I especially like the last lines in which you tie these activities into Christian fellowship.
As I was reading your poem I kept thinking of God and how pleased He is to hear the sound of His people rejoicing in one another and in Him.
10/19/07
Lovely imagery, and a wonderful, wonderful message. This is such a blessing - I especially like the last two stanzas.
10/21/07
Your ending stanzas really did it for me. Great job!
I love the last 2 lines especially, Verna. I can see this every day in my own life as God brings people into my life, like you, my friend, who bring such joy and encouragement and fellowship every time we are in contact. You have it all nailed down perfectly in this wonderful piece! You're such a treasure!