The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/07
Nice flow, word usage makes it easy to picture characters and scene in your mind, predictable story but still fun. Enjoyed it!
08/30/07
This made me smile. I like how the girls prayed together, and the ending. Blowing her fear out of the horn is great imagery.
08/31/07
Sweet depiction of the friendship between the two young women.

Be careful of the difference betwee breath/breathe and make up/makeup. Perhaps a more compelling title?

As a (very poor) musician, I can really relate to the very real emotions here!
You have used a good story to describe stage fright very well.
09/04/07
Boy, I used to shake like a leaf every time I had to sing a solo! I can truly relate to this kind of fear. Good descriptions and characterizations.
09/04/07
This was a nice, encouraging story. Thanks for writing.

Debbie