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08/24/07
Oh, wow, I loved it, laughed clear through it. Great rhyming and pace. Put this one in the puppy pen.
08/24/07
Hilarious. Enjoyed this thoroughly.
This is very unique and entertaining. Love it!
08/25/07
Absolutely hysterical! Bravo! Thank you for the laugh!
Really clever! Loved it!
08/26/07
Funny and clever. Thanks for a bright, humorous little break!
08/29/07
I love this! So much fun! I need to say that the first thing I thought of as I read this was "this is very Kenn Allanish." And that, as I'm sure you know, is quite a compliment.
I loved the unfolding of this story. It was fun to watch the progression.
Beth, this is such a cute and delightful tale! LOL! It gave me quite a chuckle tonight as I'm enjoying some free time reading at my favorite place..FW. I'm going to be a regular in your comment boxes! Love this fun poem!...and I do so much appreciate your encouraging comments on my entries. You're a special blessing here at FW! Write on! ;-)
Beth, Thanks to the lovely comment you left on my story this week, I came looking for something you had written. This is so hilarious! Your poetry is also very very good. I'm glad I found it.
09/29/07
Beth, this is priceless! I plan to feature it in the Front Page Showcase for the week of October 8. Look for it on the FW home page.
10/08/07
Oh, my goodness! I almost woke my kids up laughing out loud! This is SO FUNNY! It is a masterpiece.
10/09/07
This is a priceless masterpiece! Congratulations for being showcased - this sooooo deserves it!
10/09/07
Oh, Beth - I've already told you how much I LOVE LOVE LOVE this piece - and who you remind me of ;) - but I'll say it again. This is FABULOUS MS. KA ;) SO glad you got the showcase!
This is a hoot! No "kid"ding... It would be a riot to hear it read aloud with expression. Maybe they could then end it with singing Bill Grogan's Goat. I love FaithWriters because they never let a "jewel" like this go unnoticed. Great job!
10/09/07
Delightful! Such fun.
Congratulations, Beth, on your Frontpage Showcase spot! You entertain us all with this witty and delightful poem!
How cleverly and delightfully written!
10/03/08
So glad you shared this for Fiction Friday. I'm STILL smiling!
10/03/08
This is a hoot! My favorite line was:

When life gives you lemons --
You make lemonade.
When gifted with a billy goat --
Life throws you a grenade.

I'm glad you posted this for "Friday Fiction," because I hadn't seen it before.

Fun stuff!
10/06/08
ROFL!! What an absolute delight! I loooooove this!!