The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/07
Wonderful meter and rhyme! This flowed beautifully. The story drew me in and held me till the end. Great!! :)
Very teary stuff! A good reminder of when we lose someone, God is still there.
Beautiful, yet very sad sentiment.
06/18/07
Made me a little teary at the end.
06/25/07
A very creative and touching poem; and although sad, it reminds us that Jesus is always by our side through thick and thin, and yes!... through the happy days as well as the dark ones. Nice job - and very well done.