The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/07
What a sweet, inspiring story! You did a wonderful job of conveying "the faith of a child" in a grown-up world, and how even a small child can encourage adults to perceive the importance of trusting and following God. Good job!
06/10/07
This is a sweet story and would be a good one to read to children who are wondering about heaven and salvation.
06/11/07
Adventure in faith -- WOnderful writing! LOve it!
06/16/07
Sometimes it's a sad thing that the challenges are only 750 words -- I could really see this expanded into something longer : )
06/16/07
Your story makes me want to crawl into the cozy cabin and experience the adventure along with Gavyn. I hope you go on to the rest of the story that you hint is coming, and turn this into an illustrated children's book. Thank you for your comment on my children's story, too. I appreciate your words!