The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/07
Love the title and this painting of spring!
One of my favorites for the imagery of the new birth of spring!
05/26/07
The imagery is so beautiful I can smell the flowers and grass. Very well done, you are very good at this genre!
05/28/07
Wonderful word pictures from beginning to end. A colorful description of spring.
Gorgeous descriptions here. I think this would be especially appealinig to children. Nice job!
05/28/07
Wonderful imagery. I could feel the earth waking up. Good job.
Wonderful account of the awakening of Spring.
I was impressed with the absense of abstract words, which could so easily be written into a spring poem. Good concrete wording and description all through!
BTW, my poem is right under yours and there are a few "spring poem" comments left thetre for you by mistake!