The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/07
You raise great points here. I especially liked the second paragraph/line about the jabbing forces etc...Very strong line.
05/18/07
Hmmm, this is pretty interesting. I was expecting something a little different, but this was pretty good. The fourth paragraph is my favorite. ^_^
05/22/07
This was really cool! :)
10/19/07
Better late than never... but I was caught by the title when I came by to visit your profile.

This is a really cool take on the science fiction topic and very well written.