The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
Everytime I think of insurance salesmen, I think of Ned Ryerson from Groundhog's Day. Not much a threat to the heart with Ned Ryerson, but sometimes fate can hit you with a left hook, huh?

Clever writing.
Ha ha...this was very good. A little creepy and then quite funny.
Well, sometimes we dream too big and leave ourselves open to disappointment. How true to life! I like the way you wrote this. And I like the father--just like mine was.
04/29/07
What a creative romance here! Great dialogue and story flow. Very nice read!
05/01/07
You kept me engrossed in the story all the way to the maddening, sad twist at the end! Very well-written piece that left me feeling so sorry about the girl's hopes being dashed and irritated at the guy's "slimey" smoothness! :)
Cute ending. It certainly suprised me. Very romantic on her part. Good job.