The Official Writing Challenge
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Everytime I think of insurance salesmen, I think of Ned Ryerson from Groundhog's Day. Not much a threat to the heart with Ned Ryerson, but sometimes fate can hit you with a left hook, huh?

Clever writing.
Ha ha...this was very good. A little creepy and then quite funny.
Well, sometimes we dream too big and leave ourselves open to disappointment. How true to life! I like the way you wrote this. And I like the father--just like mine was.
What a creative romance here! Great dialogue and story flow. Very nice read!
You kept me engrossed in the story all the way to the maddening, sad twist at the end! Very well-written piece that left me feeling so sorry about the girl's hopes being dashed and irritated at the guy's "slimey" smoothness! :)
Cute ending. It certainly suprised me. Very romantic on her part. Good job.