The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
My curiosity is piqued. I want to know more. The story was a little hard to follow, because it seemed to jump around too much.
Good job. I want to know what happened. The word limit is a killer!
04/12/07
I loved the names and how well you developed the characters in such a short time. I wanted more too, but you sure packed a great mystery in the limit.
04/13/07
Some great lines in here, like "Betty booped around". Word count may have gotten you, tho. What did he see that he scribbled in his book? And where is chapter 2 to this story? I want to know more! ok, may be word count got ME! :) Good set-up, and nice job with the topic!
Very good "whodonit" here. But it seemed unfinished.