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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Music (03/08/07)

TITLE: SOUNDTRACKS
By Edy T Johnson
03/14/07


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SOUNDTRACKS
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Grandpa lost his hearing; he was deaf as he could be.
But when he went to bed and slept, he found a mystery.
He woke up just ecstatic in the middle of the night.
"Oh, don't you hear the music? It is full of joy and light!

"Listen! Oh, wake up and hear the music in the air.
My deaf old ears don't matter when God gives me a new pair.
Let's laugh and dance together, while we're borne on angel wings,
'Til 'all the world give back the song which now the angels sing.'"

Grandma had diabetes and was oh so very frail.
She spent her days in wheelchair, which she called her "little jail."
But, in her dreams and visions, she saw Heaven's golden stair.
"If only these old broken feet could get me over there!"

Little Jane said, "Grandma, it is more than you can do.
Remember the Good Shepherd is the One who carries you.
He'll waltz you up to Heaven so that you can peek inside
The gates of pearl wide open welcoming all to abide."

Listen! Oh, wake up and hear the music sweet and dear.
Whatever disability, it's where God beckons clear.
He's transformed death's adversity. It's finished, don't you see?
His New Creation's at the door and Jesus holds the key.

Listen! Oh, wake up and hear. There's music in the air.
Those deaf old ears won't matter when God gives us a new pair.
We'll laugh and dance together, as if borne on angel wings,
'Til 'all the world give back the song which now the angels sing!'

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Based on two true stories and a phrase from the Christmas carol "It Came Upon The Midnight Clear" by Edmund Hamilton Sears, 1810 - 76


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Donna Howard03/15/07
I'm not a poet, so can't critique your work, but as a hearing impaired person, I loved your last four lines.
Julie Arduini03/15/07
I absolutely loved this. It flowed well, it was just infused with hope and praise, and then to learn at the end the basis of the story---great!!
Marilyn Schnepp 03/16/07
Perfect rhythm and meter on this poetic masterpiece! Just great! Plus it had a beautiful message...loved it! From title to end..supurb!
Monica Raye Daly03/18/07
This is wounderful love it I want more.
Jacquelyn Horne03/20/07
Wonderful encouraging poetry.
Verna Cole Mitchell 03/20/07
This poem has such an encouraging message. I especially liked the last two stanzas.
Edy T Johnson 03/23/07
TOP 40 ENTRIES - “MUSIC” CHALLENGE
28 Soundtracks by Edy T Johnson
TOP 15 LEVEL 3 ENTRIES - “MUSIC” CHALLENGE
8 Soundtracks by Edy T Johnson
Looks like shorter is better. After the last few weeks I didn't think I stood a chance any more :)
Marilyn Schnepp 03/23/07
I commented on this BEFORE I knew who you were; now I will Congratulate you now that I KNOW who you are - you made the lists Edy! So proud of you, and you ventured into the realm of poetry which I hadn't seen before. Nice Job and well deserved to be up there on the charts! A work of art, Edy! Kudos!
Donald Paulson03/24/07
I really enjoyed this and so true. thank you. god bless and keep writing.
Ann FitzHenry03/24/07
Oh Edy! What a wonderful entry! Complete with a lesson and right on topic. I enjoyed it very much! :-) Congratulations on placing in the top 40.
Valora Otis03/25/07
Wow! Edy this is lovely and inspiring to me. I kept thinking of the wheelchair sitting in my garage thoughout this story. I remember it well. This piece is so well written. Congrats on the top 40 placing! Way to go my friend.
Hugs! Val


   
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