The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
Bravo! Scary - but bravo! ;) I think in this day and age this is one thing that is so possible and you took us through it all the way. Scary - but really very good.
03/09/07
Wow! This story gripped my attention and held it to the very end! Very descriptive and well drawn in dialogue and events. Good job!
03/09/07
Wow - intense story. Well-written.
03/12/07
Exciting and page turning type story; however, unfinished. So many questions left unanswered for the Reader who wants to know.
Very sad. Kept me reading. Good job.
03/15/07
Powerfully told. Well done. I loved the way that you told us of the baby's birth. Skillfully written - great job!