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03/08/07
What an extraordinary piece. It started out with a joy ride and ended up in a puddle of tears. You have the ability to grip your readers! If my house had started burning down, I would have had to finish reading this before I exited. It's that good!
03/08/07
Humor, pathos, hope and humanity - this article has it all. Good job on writing about such a tough subject.
03/10/07
A great story - a new beginning for a battered woman. Thank God there are really surgeons who do these things. Very well written, good flow, and a nice way of bringing the characters to life.
03/11/07
Well written entry; but when it comes to "topic," I would classify it more as a story about spousal abuse, plastic surgery or even about a kind doctor; perhaps if the title were "Shopping for Noses" - THEN I would say...right on target. (a personal opinion only) However, it is an interesting read and has a great message for abused wives, who should adhere to this doctor's advice.
03/12/07
Well written. I loved the touch of the childs nursery rhyme. Good job.
03/12/07
P.S. I like the title because it shows that God was in this with her. She hadn't failed at all and this was one of His gifts to her. Well done!
03/12/07
Yes, that was an angel. I like his form of payment. It forces those who would not otherwise be able to cope, to get out of abusive situations. Good story. Well written.
03/12/07
Excellent.