The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Oh, this was cute. I especially liked the last line. It's amazing how God works sometimes, isn't it? A few minor grammatical errors, but nothing major. Also, and I have a feeling word count may have been a factor in this, I would have included the full text of Isaiah 41:10, even if it was in an author's note. (Which are not included in the word count) Great entry. Keep writing.
03/04/07
This is a great lesson, what a good way to use the theme.
Enjoyable reading. Good pov.