The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
Loved the story!
01/24/05
This is great - I laughed all the way through this - you write vividly!

I agree - I doubt that people will complain about the Superbowl and how much it costs to put on - do you think Newdow will be there to complain about the National Anthem and prayer?!




01/24/05
Great flow to this article. The ending went right to my heart. May every person on this earth be in attendance!
01/24/05
I loved it. I'll see you there at the Feast.
01/24/05
Great article and very well written.
01/25/05
Great article. I liked your approach to the topic. Very well written.

Kathy
01/27/05
You write with an easy, laid-back feel which is enjoyable to read. Very smooth.

I think I'll limit myself to those comments. Thanks for posting.
Love it! Especially the conclusion. I desire that they all will be there too.
Good story, good flow, well written. God bless you.