The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/07
Very nice! Enjoyed the message. God bless.
Very nice re-telling of this story. Good dialogue, and well written.
02/10/07
Wonderful update of a familiar story. You've done a good job here, and I liked your "impish" Jesus and His offer of coffee. I KNEW there was something sacred about coffee.
02/11/07
A modern day replay of the Bible Story, and like the Writer says: "loosely" based on that story - but I enjoyed the modern retake, and couldn't stop reading. Had to watch the ending...and yes, Jesus forgave him! Such a wonderful story retold; nice job, and written well with modern radio, reels instead of nets...but such a wonderful ending, "over coffee", Peter is reconciled with his Master. I liked it.
02/11/07
I really enjoyed your contemporary version of this Bible story. It sort of makes it more real -- putting it in today's time and setting. I did see a couple of typos and tense changes, but you probably already saw those too.