The Official Writing Challenge
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This is wonderful! Great rhyme scheme and metrical structure, and a unique, creative "take" on the topic. Very, very nice.
Nice job! Kudos! I like your work.
Yes, so nicely done! Reading the 'faces' of others hearts is a skill my mother had that I continually strive to achieve. You've described this art in your artful poem. Thank you!
Wow - reading faces - love this take on the topic! How different our relationships could be if we'd all take this seriously - let our hearts be known and strive to know others deeply! I found this inspiring and affirming (at a time when I'm struggling to evaluate my interaction with certain people). :-)