The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/07
Very creative story. I especially like the sentence where he was "incredibly satisfied and at the same time ravenous for more." Good read.
02/01/07
Loved it. Caught me up immediately in the quest for the perfect book...of course the Word of God.
02/01/07
A delightful story that makes an excellent point. Very well-written.
02/01/07
Delightful read . . . very insightful.
02/02/07
This is delightful! I really got a kick out of those "dry begats." what a clever approach to the topic, and written very well.
02/03/07
Cute story. Held me captive.
02/03/07
Absolutely charming, delightful and a delicious menu of various and sundry appetizers, side dishes, and even desserts. Loved it! And, oh so creative! Enjoyed every bite of this tasty cuisine; and enough left over for a midnight snack or afternoon munchie...yummmmmmy
02/03/07
oops, forgot to mention Great writing and a Very impressive message! sorry..
02/06/07
Nice job! Kudos! I like your work.
02/07/07
Very creative. The tour of books was wonderful and I loved the hint of honey in the Bible. A bit of a tense error towards the end but not detracting to your overall story. Good job.
02/08/07
This Tastes like a winner to me :)
02/08/07
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! As a judge this week, this story stood out to me from among the ordinary. Your creativity is truly a gift from God. Keep up the good work, and again, CONGRATULATIONS!
02/08/07
A deserved win. A very delightful story. I smiled all the way through.
02/08/07
Congratulations, Elaine! I thought this might hit the spotlight and I am thrilled to see it at the top of the list. I look forward to my copy of the BOOK!
02/08/07
Oh this is a very creative story! Good job, and much deserved 1st place! (I find the begets a bit dry, too.)
02/08/07
Congratulations Elaine - what a great story. A well-deserved win.
02/12/07
What a SO well-deserved win! Such a creative take and so wonderful wonderful WONDERFUL!
02/14/07
Impressive. I was held captive from start to finish
06/28/07
This is going into my favorites. Wonderful story.