The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fascinating article--and I was especially taken with the "black shoe polish" detail. It's little bits like that which distinguish special writing from good writing--and this is special.
I could have easily been reading this in any number of magazines; meaning the quality was fantastic, very informative, moving and inspiring. Great job. God bless.
Extremely interesting and well-told. Your detail does much to add to the reality of this story, and your voice was perfect. Excellent job!
This is informative, and an easy read as well. Good attention to detail, and well written.
Incredible description and detail. Superb job! Blessings, Cheri
This was wonderful. I could see the scene vividly. Extremely well written and informative. Thanks for sharing it.
I always enjoy reading your African tales. This one was superb. Thanks for sharing.
This one would have worked perfectly for this week's challenge: Unsung Hero. Is there a sequel? Good job.
Well done - I was there in Africa. Great story, and moving (in more ways than one.)