The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the descriptions of the characters and the land in this story! I could see them and felt as though I were there. I could also hear them speak and enjoyed their country dialect. They were really brought to life. Great job!
As the wife of a farmer who's pushing sixty and living in tornado alley, this realy hit home with me. It was a very enjoyable read, and your characters were believable. Thanks for sharing it.
heehee! I loved the end, especially when John was hurrying out to say 'goodbye'. Very well written, good job!
Love your detailed description - very vivid and real. Such a heartwarmer.
Very nice! This could have been an episode on "Highway to Heaven". Extremely well done. Thanks for sharing it.
A very sweet story loaded with detail. I could picture this story as it unfolded. I liked the little detail of the sound of gravel as the man approached and his beat up green truck with no license plates and more. Good job!