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This was an enjoyable read. I like the idea of "spiritual legs." Thanks for sharing.
12/02/06
I really enjoyed this. Your characterization is wonderful. I felt like I really knew Bennie and the woman. I almost felt, however, like you didn't need the last couple paragraphs - I feel like the story would be stronger without them. Just my opinion, though. What a wonderful tale!
I echo Joanne, last 2 paragraphs could be cut. The meaning behind the story is great - everyone has something to offer and no contribution is too small. We each need to find our niche, seeking the Lord in prayer and asking HIM how HE wants us to serve.