The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your story and I love the name of your group -"Saints In Waiting". (In fact, I love it so much I just might borrow it for my own senior group.) As I read this, I could just picture all of you kazooing and it brought a big smile. Nice work!
11/30/06
Hilarious! I was grinning all the way through, and I just lost it when they brought in the bicycle horn. Priceless!
12/01/06
Me too! This is great - funny and yet with a terrific message — several, in fact.
12/02/06
This was SO enjoyable! Wish I could have been there to hear it. Well...if they Do play in heaven I guess I will! Great job!
12/03/06
Such a fun read:) “She stopped playing too and pointed right back at him.” “Personally, I think my honking that horn after each verse stole the show…” Adorable!
Hahaha! This is great. How fun!
12/04/06
I LOVE the voice in this, and the humor! This was so charming and fun and delightful!
Betty, this was a wonderful package of lessons, told in a way easy to decipher. Thanks for sharing a story that not just entertains but also teaches important lessons. Keep on!