The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your down-to-earth conversational style. A tiny correction: "patients names" should have an apostrophe. All-in-all, a good message with a light-hearted approach. I love your last line!
It is so true that God does not keep office hours, thank goodness. I like the talking watch in your story. It added just the right touch of whimsy. Thank you for sharing this.
Well-done--you tapped into a universal experience to give your readers a universal truth, and you did it with wit and grace. There were a few errors that would be caught with a closer edit, I'm sure. Good job here.