The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
Great message - great poem.
10/20/06
I stumbled a bit on your rhythm, but your message is clear. They deserve our respect and our prayers.
10/23/06
A great poem right on target, topic-wise. However, the meter is off a bit in the rhythm...but the message is loud and clear. Good Job
11/13/06
Come and post your poetry at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/
This is very good advice. We often neglegt to be thankful for our protectors. (Firemen and women, policemen and women and our soldiers)