The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this poem. The truth is clear and well thought out. The rhythm was a little shaky but I still enjoyed reading it.
Enjoyable! Your meter and rhythm was a bit off, but the poem itself was very enjoyable. Good work! :)
Some verses were "off" a bit, but I enjoyed the read, and the creativity. The message rings loud and clear...the snake is still alive today, for inside of me I still harbor animosity towards Eve (loved your rib-wife Eve)for her weakness in getting us into mess of sin & death. But, I too, fall short and should not point fingers. Nicely done. Kudos.
One of Dav's Favs this week.
Oh! I really like this. It is so true of us all.