The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/06
Well done. You added some humour into a very moving story.
09/14/06
bless her heart. I can imagine how much that would mean to her. Great story. Loved it when the salesman wiped the drool from his face! ;)
09/16/06
How precious! And, I loved the humor you interjected. I especially loved it when the salesman wiped the drool from his mouth. Great story! Very well written! :)
09/17/06
Very clever and enjoyable - the humor was just the right touch. I truly enjoyed this story!!
09/21/06
Lovely story with touches of basic down to earth realism on the narrator's part - 'let him sweat'. His whole attitude to the salesman was very entertaining. Good job.
09/22/06
I really liked the way you wrote this Terri! It was a very good stretch! I'm proud of you! Love, Pat