The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/06
I felt as though I was an unseen observant into Arlene's life. I felt her loneliness and was happy to see the hope that she saw.
Bit of romance! Cute, charming story. I savored every bite (bit). You really got my salivary glands to working.
08/21/06
This is sweet and just melancholy enough that this made Arlene very real. When all your dreams are past, it just might make it hard to get out of bed in the morning. [I can identify with that!] How delightful that you left us with a taste of hope for Arlene's tomorrow!