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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Vision (08/03/06)

TITLE: CANíT GO WRONG WITH JESUS
By Mtheto Hara
08/05/06


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Yeah
What it is right now
Itís about that time
To make that vow
Vow to love Jesus
Now and forever
I am appealing to everybody
Lets do this together
Mom and dad
Brothers and sisters
Each and every body
Pray with persistence
God has a plan
Lets all be part of it
Believe in the father
And the son whoís part of him
No more holding back
Say it out loud
I believe is Jesus
Of that Iím proud
Gone are the days
When I was so playful
The time is now
For me to stay faithful
I want that seat
In the kingdom of Heaven
For all my sins
May I be forgiven
I am tired sinning
I wanna have purpose
I am changing my vision
I got a new focus

Lord have mercy and Christ have mercy
Dear God hear my song
Lord have mercy and Christ have mercy
I know with Jesus I cant go wrong

The Bible tells me
He is my salvation
Why get saved
Is that really a question?
I am heading towards
A brand new life
And I know that his way
Is the truth and the life
Without him
Iím floating on air
On the move
But going no where
I need direction
To him I turn
In all situations
From him I learn
Itís not easy
Of course itís hard
But do not worry
We are working with God
Everything is not
Really that important
Unless God says
Make it important
All these things
Aint worth having
Unless God says
We all must have em
So stay humble
And love all others
In the same way
We are loved by our mothers
Itís all part of
Changing your vision
So let God be
Your reason for breathin

Lord have mercy and Christ have mercy
Dear God hear song
Lord has mercy and Christ have mercy
I know with Jesus I cant go wrong.


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Jan Ackerson 08/10/06
This strikes me as very rap-ish--is that what you were going for? I can definitely see a youth group performing this, and hear the percussion in the background.
Rita Garcia08/11/06
I'm with Jan on this one, great rap song! Inspirational!
Marilyn Schnepp 08/12/06
Rap isn't exactly my cup of tea - but if I had to listen, I'd like to hear this one! Because it's true..."You can't go wrong with Jesus!" Good job.
Philip Barnes08/15/06
Good message and good flow.