The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
Needs paragraph spacing to make it Reader Friendly; but because it was brief...not too bad. Thanks for sharing.
I agree with the paragraph spacing. I also noticed there was a word missing in one of the sentences - nothing that some proofreading wouldn't fix (not that you didn't proofread).

A good entry to show that life isn't always fun and exciting. It's the ordinary things we do day to day that matter. Life is what we make of it. Good job.
06/23/06
I like the irony of "nothing outstanding happened today..." but in reality, every moment was important and precious.

Just let Socks eat the grasshopper, that's one less bug in the world.

An entertaining and sweet journal entry.
I adore this. I keep a journal,but I never write an entry that is this creative.
Thank you so much.
06/26/06
Thanks for sharing this peak into an ordinary day! Good message.
06/27/06
Interesting journal. Break up the paragraphs for readability.