The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Oooh! This guy is nasty---but what a delightful story you have written, creatively and technically perfect. It's just too bad that even one "man of God" has turned out to be a wolf in sheep's clothing.
05/19/06
Well, phooey on him, and good riddance! Your story really pulled me in, and you did a marvelous job of showing how "religious" words can deceive.
05/19/06
Unfortunately there are a few of these guys around. Maybe he'll get a good dose of "Montezuma's Revenge" on the other side of the border - serves him right! Good writing.
05/22/06
Very good portrayal! I would do some double spacing and break up some of the paragraphs for easier reading on who is doing the talking.