The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/16
This was delightfully simple. Reminded me of a Winnie the Pooh ditties to start with. Healt Heath " didn't have the lilt that the poem reflected elsewhere. Bit clunky. The last line in each verse didn't carry meter well. I felt like less roses with more of the joy of the first verse would have been more enjoyable.