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10/17/14
Heart-warming story. I was a bit confused about the Amish element. It was hard to imagine two Amish girls acting so mean to Mabel. At the end of the story I wondered if it was really just an imaginary story made up by a sister and her brother play spider-man out in the back yard. I was left with more questions than answers - nevertheless it was enjoyable to read.
10/18/14
Interesting and different read. I enjoyed it...I felt the conflict within the young MC as she approached the school.
I too wondered it it was in fact all "make believe" by brother and sister. That's good when a story has you thinking, so well done!

God bless~