The Official Writing Challenge
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LOve, Love, Love this story. Life as seen through the eyes of a very old person can be amazing, but talking about eternity with others is our goal. Thank you and God bless.
02/25/11
you got a great story here and used the word count well to make a cracker of a tale. lovely
02/25/11
That was a good one! I really liked the end point. Yes the regrets of not telling someone about Jesus can be painful. It's good to project to an old age and reflect back on our lives and what we would have wanted to accomplish. So let's do now what we know we will regret in the futute if we don't do it. You write very well. Thanks for sharing.
03/03/11
LOVED this story. And oh, such an important point! As the old saying goes, "Only one life, will soon be past, Only what's done for Christ will last" What a great way of illustrating that vital point. :) Congratulations!
03/03/11
WELL DONE!!