The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing. So vivid and clear. Enjoyed this story. Keep writing!
Loved the story. Good descriptions of the MC and the actions in the revival. Good job and keep writing.
12/11/10
God still works miracles today. Sammy and Mike remind me of 2 high school friends who had a similar experience - except when snake handling began they exited in a hurry!
This was a delightful trip into the past. You did a great job pulling me in and making me feel like I was there. Nice descriptions!
12/14/10
a great short story..... good descriptions and well rounded with a beginning middle and end :-) and a good take on the topic theme
12/17/10
well done :-)