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Topic: Body Language (11/25/10)
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TITLE: Five steps to germination. | Previous Challenge Entry
By David Nicoli
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To sow the faith seed.
A higher growth rate,
That you’re sure to need.
Step one, keep quiet,
And don’t shout.
Don’t tell others to believe,
When you still doubt.
Step two, stock up,
Fill your bag with seed.
Study your Holy Bible,
That’s what you need.
Step three, act,
Do what the Bible says.
Change your body language,
Like one who obeys.
Step four, wait a bit,
Learn even more.
Don’t plant your seed,
Until you’ve filled your bag more.
Step five, don’t talk,
It needs to be quiet.
If you think it doesn’t work,
Maybe you should try it.
There, all done,
You’ve planted a faith seed.
Talk wasn’t needed,
Because deed it what you need.
People don’t listen,
Especially to us talk.
People sooner watch,
The way Christians walk.
The lost don’t hear,
They just don’t care.
They’d rather watch,
The Christian who dare.
People don’t want words,
They want to see.
Why should they believe?
When we’re not clean?
Change your body language,
Change your deed.
That’s the fool proof guide,
To sow the faith seed.
I hope you can hear,
God’s Holy message.
And the very importance,
Of your body language.
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Your rhythm is a bit rough, but I like the strength of the repeated phrases.
Keep writing!
Especially to us talk.
People sooner watch,
The way Christians walk.
I enjoyed your poem. Great message. Blessings!