The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
Thanks for this moving entry! The first line of your second paragraph is great; I'd suggest that you start with that--your introductory paragraph is slightly weaker, and the "fantabulous" one is where the real hook is.
I loved your last lines to the "What is a mother" So neat! I especially liked the how you summed up the different roles of a mother too. Nicely done! ^_^