The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
Moving story, all too common to many, I'm afraid.

If you re-visit this some day, consider writing it as a story of one incident in your family life, with dialogue, so that we can get to know your father better.

Good title, and good writing.
04/17/08
Here's a way to look at it: Two dads are better than one! And, now one dad won.
04/18/08
The sentence "I don't know how it happen..." I find funny, because you state that you are a believer. I am sure you were praying that your father change, so why be surprised when prayer is answer? Overall good job and thanks for posting.
04/22/08
Thank God for that transformation!! What a wonderful testimony of God's goodness. This was moving and fills me with hope. Thank you.