The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
Beautiful and intense I love your entry. Very well written.
Kathy
01/24/05
Loved the words "swollen summer air." I also liked your comparison of desire and lust to animals. I agree, it was intense, but a very passionate intensity. Enjoyed reading it!
Just exquisite. Very powerfully written with a beautiful message. Loved it!
01/25/05
I love your analogy of love like that butterfly and lust as the polar bear. Drawing our attention to the words of God expressing His love for us in Scripture was beautiful too. Thanks.
01/26/05
Your images are breathtaking and your analogies with the Song of Solomon just striking. You have a beautiful way with words.
01/27/05
Well written, thought provoking, and brings home the desire God has for us.

Good job.
I liked your word description. God bless you.