The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/06
I LOVE LOVE LOVE your "contentment poem" at the beginning of this!! PERFECT! I enjoyed the whole piece - but that start just hit me! Thanks for sharing!
08/24/06
Didn't read the title and loved the discovery process. Some work on the latter stanzas to bring their length down, would be my only siggestion.
Very cool. I believe that one must not pursue his own gain without the guidance of God. However, I also belive that to pursue no personal gain whatsoever is a blank denial of God's desire for you to prosper in His love. It is God's pleasure to reward those who faithfully do his work. Therefore, you should be equally accepting of the work and the reward.
Sobering thought here. Good job.