The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/06
Yeah, I really liked the personal conversation approach to this prayer.
06/08/06
Very good! I love the voice here--so readable and real. cute ending--and a very precious relationship between the pray-er and God.
06/09/06
Very nicely done and beautifully written! I loved it! A most enjoyable read! Kudos!
Deeeelightful!! Marita, I wish I'd found this one earlier. Very creative, believable,carries the reader right along with a touch of gentle humor and a great lesson. Your voice is beautifully developed here. So glad this gem will be published! A BIG CONGRATS!!
Congratulations on your win! Well done!
06/15/06
A great voice! I really enjoyed your article. Even though this was done in a very lighthearted way you have shared a lot of wisdom as well. Congrats on your win!