The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
The second person reference in the second sentence detracted from an otherwise powerful statement of faith.
Amen to that! And I'm with dub on the 2nd person thing. Something to watch out for in your POVs.
Awesome. That's the only sure thing in this life. Great sermon on hope.
You have a great message here, but watch the repetition of using the same words and phrases in the same sentence. It makes it flow better when you use “house” one time and “home” or “dwelling” another. Good job.