The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/05
Oh, I really enjoyed this poem. Its very touching. I especially liked the last stanza.

Thanks for reminding me of Jesus desire for me to spend eternity with him. God bless!
03/04/05
Your poem is beautiful. I love the message, and especially the challenge to be willing to live for Him, just as He was willing to live for us. I also really enjoy the beauty of the poetry. Well done.
03/04/05
Oops ... regarding the above comment, I meant that jesus was 'willing to die for us' and so we should live for Him. Anyhow, it is beautiful, even if my comment is a bit scatter-brained......