The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
Very good article. Spacing between paragraphs would help the reader and make for a more professional look. Being critical of self rather than of others makes for improvement and has set you on a better path to receiving those examples of love you quote from the Bible. Your understanding of this biblical concept has allowed you to give a wonderful message.
You have a good message to tell us. I have to re-state the previous comment, though. Try to separat paragraphs to make it more readable. God bless!
Nice job. I agree about the separations of paragraphs. That does make it more difficult to read. You've shared a very important principle here that many of u miss. Relationship is everything. Good work.