The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1546 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/13/06
I'm no dog lover, but I like this picture of your mutual unconditional love. You might want to look at the line breaks which are rather disconcerting - to begin with I thought I was reading a piece of irregular poetry! Nice writing though
04/15/06
I enjoyed this too - light, well written. Agree about the line breaks - made it a bit difficult to read.