The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
I can relate to this story. Great job!
Nice look at how our attitudes and perspective can really change our realities.
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Great Job!
03/16/06
Love the ending--I'd never thought of chains as ribbons, and that's a charming thought.
03/16/06
Yes, this is lovely. I thought the central metaphor was great.